tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27301270.post114732762921270668..comments2008-11-19T19:24:32.435-05:00Comments on UM Writers' Community: suggestions?Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27301270.post-1147455719204817352006-05-12T13:41:00.000-04:002006-05-12T13:41:00.000-04:00I really like this one - I'm at work right now, bu...I really like this one - I'm at work right now, but when I get a chance I'll give you some more feedback.Neilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09426464030942307463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27301270.post-1147356351755275472006-05-11T10:05:00.000-04:002006-05-11T10:05:00.000-04:00Wow, Jerry, this is... intense.Actually, I read th...Wow, Jerry, this is... intense.<BR/><BR/>Actually, I read this yesterday and was going to comment on it today, but I see you've revised it. It's certainly more polished now, but if you still have it, could you put up the previous draft too? It was rough, but there were some cool ideas there that you've taken out of here... I particularly remember the last line "This story is about typing and Manishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11460310818106684031noreply@blogger.com