Tuesday, June 26, 2007

It's been a very long time since I've posted anything on here... and I've been apart from all of you for a long time, too... but I have been writing. Here's the shortest poem I've written recently... if you get a chance to give some feedback (any feedback), I'd certainly appreciate it. Hope you are all well! Miss you--

CAT’S BAR SONG NUMBER ONE

in a wild world, at the t.v. room:
I’m—under muscle men in underpants
and striped black, white star,
scar- painted faces, while
they bleed and they pound on
their heavyweight champ— yes, I’m
getting by on that smile.

1 comments:

Ankit said...

The last line goes right over my head. But I think it's good otherwise.